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Hi Ima,

I've attached your essay with some edits and comments.  I'll briefly summarise them here with some suggestions for the next version:

  1. Brilliant insight
  2. Another brilliant insight
  3. Yet another brilliant insight

We can discuss these ideas some more in our next session.

My Essay-EDITED.docx

When a book and a head collide and a hollow sound is heard, must it always have come from the book? -- Lichtenberg

 

 

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