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Hi Ima, I've attached your essay with some edits and comments. I'll briefly summarise them here with some suggestions for the next version: Brilliant insight Another brilliant insight Yet another brilliant insight We can discuss these ideas some more in our next session. My Essay-EDITED.docx

If you're working with other students in a group, they can also comment and quote your posts, adding insights on important ideas and concepts!

Hi there, I've finished my essay draft and was wondering if you could give me some feedback? My Essay.docx

Here is my essay topic: In Twelve Angry Men, many jurors had personal beliefs or experiences which influenced their opinions. What were some of these beliefs and how did they effect the impartiality of the trial?

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About the discussion forums The forums are where most of the real work is done between sessions! Here is where I interact with students between sessions, offering insights and comments which they can access 24/7. I can also post any useful information I come across which may be relevant to my students' interests or assignments. Each forum post consists of a topic; topics which receive several replies become discussion threads, which allow students to dive deep into issues and carry on important discussions which remain in their Space as long as they're a client. These threads can be used to prepare for written assignments as well as study for oral presentations and final exams. How can students use the forums? Motivated students can do lots with the forums! They can: Post questions about ideas arising from tutoring sessions or their English class Post assignments and essay prompts for us to work on between (and during) sessions Post research materials relating to their assignment(s) Carry on detailed discussions to build a sophisticated body of knowledge about an issue And much more! Check out the sample discussion threads for more information about how the forums can work for you or your student!

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